makotosagara: (Missionary Position)
Chapter 1 ~ Lauded Heroes Are For the Birds Review Replies
Chapter 1 Reviews )Chapter 2 ~ The Attack Review Replies
Chapter 2 Reviews )
Chapter 3 ~ Unwelcome Visitors Review replies:
Chapter 3 Reviews )
Chapter Four ~ Silly Disagreements With...
Chapter 4 Reviews )
Chapter Five ~ ...Harry and Draco...
Chapter 5 Reviews )
Chapter Six - Some Aurors Are Rather Stupid
Chapter 6 Reviews )
Chapter Seven - Moronic Death Eaters Are Truly Troubling
Chapter 7 Reviews )
Chapter Eight - All the World Is a Stage Reviews
Chapter 8 Reviews )
Chapter Nine - Actors Must Learn Their Lines Review Replies
Chapter 9 Reviews )
Chapter Ten ~ Mutually Beneficial Allies Review Replies
Chapter 10 Reviews )
Chapter 11 ~ Coming Home? Review Replies
Chapter 11 Reviews )
Chapter 12 ~ Dirty, Scheming Slytherins Reviews
Chapter 12 Reviews )
Chapter 13 ~ Getting to Know You Reviews
Chapter 13 Reviews )
Chapter 14 ~ A Puzzlement Reviews
Chapter 14 Reviews )
Chapter Fifteen ~ A Time for Thought and a Time for Action Reviews
Chapter 15 Reviews )
Chapter Sixteen ~ Home-grown Healers
Chapter 16 Reviews )
Chapter Seventeen ~ Revenge is Spiffy Reviews
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Chapter Eighteen ~ Tick Tock, Tick Tock Reviews
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Chapter Nineteen ~ Scouring the Land Reviews
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Chapter Twenty ~ A Showdown, of Sorts Reviews
Diana: Update soon!  Please tell me you're joking, right?
delia cerrano: I've been dying for someone to tell Ron off forever!  Can't wait to see what Mione has to say to Ron. Yes, there's more to come still. Ron and Harry are going to really going to have to learn to be friends again, as this conversation has really pushed Harry to his limits. Communication is going to by letter for a while. =P
moodysavage: I hope your mom gets better and that real life isn't driving you crazy... or at least not too crazy because life tends to do that. Great chapter! I always do like watching a powerful Harry and Ron needs to stop letting that temper of his rule everything... though I don't see him figuring that out. Thanks so much, moody! Real life is as insane as it ever was, but I'll live, I hope. I do love a powerful!Harry too, and you're right about Ron on both counts. Expect the reconciliation to be a long and difficult process between the Trio.
CareLessLover: Harry is quite pissed. Good job Ron at making Harry an enemey towards yourself. Plus, you just made whatever little doubt Harry had left vanish. Congrates! Yes, Harry's a little ball of ANGRY! Ron's a smart boy, yes? And you're right about Harry not having doubts about wanting distance between himself and Ron for good reason. But, our redheaded friend is always good for that, yes?
unneeded:  i haven't harassed you have i? i hope not.  whiny, naggy readers are a pet peeve of mine, along with crappy spelling/grammar, wall o text and misused words. worse yet, they can even put writers off up dating to spite them which is opposite to what they're after. seriously, who are we to demand a damn thing?!  it's not like you're getting paid for this.  It's great that they love your story and all but seriously people, kindly shut the hell up.  thank you, before you piss the author off to the point that they go and post elsewhere. Ahhhhh, that feels better. Rant Complete.  ^^  oh, arking up all over the place. volatile aren't they.  good thing Cissa is getting good at fielding those. i think i agree with your friend though, to soon and it would have  undermined it some how, robbing it of its force. good grief, ickle ronnikins is completely out of control... i mean, har wasn't exactly the epitome there either, but at least he's not attacking ppls property and carrying on like a complete nutter.  i'm not looking forward to what mio has to say, it's probably going to be extremely painful for her. No, sweetie, I wasn't talking about you! I was talking to the people who sent me a ton of reviews (over on ff.net, not aff.net) DEMANDING that I update. There were three or four in the span of a few hours. I seriously contemplated just deleting the entire story, but doing something like that wouldn't be fair to you and my other loyal readers who wait so patiently. You can also thank Jokes for helping me see that! Thanks for your rant supporting me. It makes me feel better! Yes, Harry and Ron and Draco are just little balls of hate right now! Ron's definitely screwing things up by not at least being patient and waiting for things to be discussed like adults, but Ron's not really known for his maturity half the time, now is he? Harry's very angry, but it's more like angry on behalf of Draco and Hermione than for himself. No, Hermione and Ron aren't going to have a conversation full of sweetness and light. I'm just glad that Draco is seeing her more as a friend than before. ^_^
Seiren: Seems I missed reviewing a chapter last time, so good work on that one. For this one, I totally love when Harry lets his magic out to play. :D Great chapter and I hope home life is better soon for you x Yeah, you did. Ooops? It's okay! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it anyway. Yes, I love a powerful!Harry as much as anyone, but I just don't want him to hurt Draco and Hermione in the mean time! Thanks for the well wishes! See you next chapter! ^_^
Demonadine: ooo I am really liking this story! I can hardly wait for more. Why thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it and looking forward to more. Thank you for reviewing.
makotosagara: (H/D)

Chapter One ~ Okay, Reality Sucks
Sylvia:  I have only read two chapters and I am utterly hooked! I love it. Excellent and economical use of language, powerful writing style. Reminds me a little of the way JK writes, but with a little more visceral strength. Very, very good.   Glad that you liked it. The story gets more verbose as I go along, but I hope that doesn't take away from the actual story's plot. Thank you for reviewing!

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Chapter Twenty-Eight ~ Waiting for you Reviews
unneeded: sighs at Ron's possey of twats.  they are such useless wastes of space.  V wouldn't care if the mb s and halfbloods were close with har or not when it come to the whole maim, torture, kill thing...except that he might make their deaths a bit extra messy.  they leave hogwarts though, they can pretty much count em selves dead. hopefully the twins can keep them from doing anything further on the moronicus much list.  :p  you so totally pinched my idea.  Still, i KNEW that could come back to bite them.  that pretty much sells sev up sewage creak as well huh.  I hope he doesn't get dead.  he's still useful n such and without him the
greengrass girls are meat.  ya know, all things considered, you'd think a super slyth like luc would appreciate and make use of such an ability rather than deride it.  what happened to using all the tools at your disposal?  a wife with future glimpse would be an extremely valuable tool.  he shouldn't have let his squeamishness get in the way. Yay!  make up sex! they're so cute and ridiculously hot together.  Yeah, Ron and his friends are pretty annoying and stupid. I plan on working on that. You're right about Voldie not caring about who's friends with Harry or their bloodstatus, at least. The twins can only do so much. I think they're going to have to make their move against Ron soon though because I'm getting tired of Ronnie's stupidity. Yes, I admit that I used your idea. It had been hovering in the back of my mind since I faked Narcissa's death, but your idea of how Lucius finds out was too
good to pass up. Yeah, Sev's fucked. There's no nice way around it. But he's not down or out yet. Don't worry about Astoria and Daphne, they'll be okay. Lucius should have seen the value in his wife, and he did up to a point, but he saw Voldemort's victory as more important than his wife and children.  Yes, yes, make up sex. I agree they're stupidly cute and hot together. All's okay. For now.

Seiren: I'm finding myself more and more caught up in storylines and less bothered about the smex scenes. It blasphemy to the genre I think lol. Anyway, this chapter was cute, and I can feel something brewing from the Ron side of things that I think the twins wont be able to stop. I am glad you got the confidence to work with Fred and George, they are great material most of the time, and yay for Fred being alive. in a non fanfic related thing, I passed that one exam (five more to go before I pass the course *_*) and thanks.  Yeah, this story moves around a lot, I know, but the storylines, I hope aren't too distracting. The smex scenes aren't really the focus of the story, and I've tried to be true to the fact that Harry and Draco are lovers, yes, but there are a ton of other things going on around them that can't be ignored for long. It's okay to be captivated by the plot. It means I'm doing a good job, I think. Yeah, Ron's up to something, as usualy, but the twins are going to keep him from fucking with Harry and his group at least. Fred and George.... I was intimidated at first, but after I wrote that letter with them for this story, I found myself warming up to the idea of really USING them as characters in the story. And they've become a lot of fun! (and Yes, Fred's alive!)  Congrats and good luck. School comes first!
makotosagara: (2x5)
Chapter Four ~ Vampires, Werewolves, and Shapeshifters, Oh My! Reviews
bibbiesparks: I was wondering what happen to chapters 2&3 because I am sure you were very busy and didn't notice that they were missing.  Thanks for pointing that out! It's been fixed now. And you're right about the busy part! Enjoy!
meg: Love it want more... Working on the next chapter. It might be a while since Gundam Wing isn't my main fandom. Sorry. Thanks for reviewing. Every little bit helps me want to work on the next chapter.
makotosagara: (pretty!)
Part 1 ~ Unfaithful Review Replies
Part 1 Reviews )
Part 2 ~ Homeless Review Replies
Part 2 Reviews )
Part 3 ~ Foolish Review Replies
Part 3 Reviews )
Part 4 ~ Hear Me Out Replies
Part 4 Replies )
makotosagara: (1x2)
Chapter Nine ~ Fireworks Reviews
Dante: Really good story! I lost track of where I read the earlier chapters and was so glad to have found it again.... I'm really glad you've continued it still, since most of the stories I like don't end up finished. The story line here is unique without falling completely out of the Canon Gundam Universe, and the way all the boys interact is realistic enough to see this happening in real life. Keep up the good work! My goodness, I post this on ff.net, foreverfandom.net, my site (www.afallenangel.net/makotosagara/), mediaminer and the 1x2_fans community here on LJ! So, it could have been ANYWHERE! *giggles* I alway finish my stories, even if it takes a few years to do it. I'm easily distracted by plunnies, but I do so love working on them! When I came back to writing after a three year hiatus, I wanted to work on something fresh, so I had my friend who's an avid 1x2 fan give me something I could work with. This is what came out of it. I've tried very hard to make it believable while staying entertaining. Luckily, my beta loves this story and she keeps poking me for the new chapters. I hate to tell you this, because it might back you sad, but there is only one more chapter of it and then we'll be done with this universe (for a while, I think). Heero's going to have to make some serious decisions about his life, but then again, so is Duo. Hope to see you around for the next and final chapter!
makotosagara: (2x5)
Reviews for chapter 9 -
Shirotora -   Oh now that is just cruel... You post 9 chapters and then a cliff hanger?! Come on cut a fellow 2x5 fan some slack here!! Anyways I am really enjoying this and I now I am all intrigued about the little tease you just gave us! PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!!!
Oh, my, how... exuberant! *giggles nervously* Um, the reason 9 chapters were posted in one day is that I *forgot* to post this story to Aff.net... I mean I post it a few other places, so I was kinda remiss it doing so with aff.net, even though I love the site. Oops? Forgive me, yeah? And as far as the cliffhanger, well, it wasn't really *meant* to be a cliffhanger, but I suppose I am kinda known for those with my other fics. And I would never really torture fellow 2x5 fans. I love them too much. Considering I've been writing 2x5 for the last 8 years.... I am glad that you're enjoying this, and I'll make sure to have chapter 10 out as soon as I can. I'm kinda in the middle of a few other fics too. :(

Reviews for Chapter 16 -
MertMidnightAngel:  I gotta admit this story has a VERY interesting concept. I'm really looking forward to your next update.
Why thank you! I can't take the credit for the original idea, as it belonged to a friend, but I was her beta at the time and helped her with the first chapter. When she decided to leave the fandom. she gave it to me, so everything after the first chapter is all me. Sadly, I've hit a wall with chapter 17, so it might be a while before I can do something about it.
makotosagara: (Hawt Dee)
unneeded:  gasps and pants helplessly.
wholy hell that was hot!  pls pls, bring us more of your writing if they're going to be like that. *goes off to get a cold drink to soothe the raging left over heat.
Hehe, thanks for the review! Um, that was a one-time thing for myself, but I thought I'd share. I *do* plan on getting a lot more intimate with Draco and Harry in the multi-chapter fics though! Oh, and you might want to just head straight into the shower. That's the only thing that's going to help!

hotflower901: What an excellent way to spend the holiday.    HOT
Thanks for the review and I agree. Harry and Draco certainly have the right idea on how to stay warm during the chilly February nights. ~^

LeaniaSTL: Oh, I loved this one! Don't know how I missed it O.o and makes me glad I got back through pages to see if there's something I overlooked. ^.^ Love a little Valentine's Day hot steamy-ness. (Is that a word...It is now because I say so ;) )
Thanks for the review, Leania! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I haven't written a whole lot lately, but I had to really write quickly to get this out on time, that's for sure. And nice way to add a few lines from the fic!

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