Wooing the Reluctant Aff.net Review Replies

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Chapter 1 - Read All Interesting News Sources

unneeded: i can hardly wait to see how he swings this... and incidentally falls in love on the way. ^^ Oh, Draco's a tricky thing, you know. Besides, he has Pansy helping him. Even if he's unsure what his best friend wants in return. ^^;;; And who said that Draco wasn't already in lust... No, wait, you said love. Hm, we'll just have to see, yeah?
la-tee: What! You can't stop! It's too good! I'm too interested for you to just stop! This is an OUTRAGE!Get back to work immediately! :) All jokes aside it was fabulous! Please continue! Oh, I've already started planning out what Draco is going to do with some help from my beta of course. But, he has to gather some more information. I'm glad that you took the time to review!
Sebastian_Jones: Fantastic start! I can't wait to read more. :) Glad that you enjoyed it! I'm working on chapter 3 as I type!
Asami_Akihito:  First chapter is looking very interesting!1 Cant wait to see what happens next! Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!


Chapter Two - Gather All Relevant Information First Review Replies

moodysavage: ahhh Draco... such a slytherin you are... but I wonder about your plan to be Harry's first. I get the feeling that Draco isn't really thinking longterm but rather 'right now' to get something he wants.I wonder if getting Harry to trust him will change him enough that he will want to be Harry's first as well as Harry's only lover. It will be interesting to see him mature a bit more. Yes, well, Draco is the epitome of a Slytherin, yes? It's why he was the Prince at Hogwarts. As for his plan to be Harry's first, yes, he's a bit preoccupied with that thought, but he really *is* thinking long term. He's just a bit bad at serious commitment. To go from a playboy with the world ready to drop to its knees for him to a one-lover man isn't going to be easy for him. I'm waiting for him to mature as well. Don't worry. Narcissa, Pansy and Blaise aren't going to let him fuck this one up.^_^
unneeded: ah draco.  a malfoy who isn't plotting something, isn't a malfoy.  it'll be interesting to see what he comes up with and if the plans work out...especially considering hes starting with a sizable disadvantage. Exactly! Draco needs to plot or he is putting his family name to shame. He doesn't want that, right? Sizable disadvantage... Hm, yes, that's one way of putting it... And just wait until you see what he has up his pretty dress robes' sleeves!
Rayne_Foxx_:   :) epp! I really like the way this is headed. Its cute and has a humourous undertone. Hope you update soon! Please let me know when you do! Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying this. I will update soonish... As long as my job doesn't kill me first. I'm pretty sure it's conspiring to do so though. Um, I don't do mailing lists for when I update. If you're interested, you should check out my LJ.

Chapter Three - Declare Your Intentions Up Front Reviews

jami_lee: just found your story and i love it!!  wondering what draco has plan for harry. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad that you've enjoyed the chapters so far. Draco has a very solid plan for what he's going to do, and Harry will just have to live with it. *snickers*
unneeded: *shakes head.  interesting... that's one way to put it.  well, at least he has Har's attention, even if it's due to murderous rage. would silencing the thing work... or the general area the thing is in?  Meh, har should have gone muggle about it.  summoned the thing to him then nail and /or stuck it to a wall in some unused room and then silenced the door. >> The articles made me snicker. th*e pick up lines from the doll even more so. this is going to be a most... lively courtship. ^^; *giggles madly* Yes, interesting certainly *is* one way of putting it. And Draco *so* has Harry's attention, but that's not always a good thing, yeah? You'll find out how Harry gets around the doll, but it's not going away until *Draco* wants it to. To be honest, Harry never even thought about trying to get rid of it the Muggle way. He's been a wizard too long, or he was just too upset, I'm afraid.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the articles. They weren't *that* hard to write, but I had the darnedest time trying to find Rita's voice to convey the best tone of sucking up and stuck up at the same time. Rita certainly is interesting. I'm just glad that my friend Sky was there to help me get it right. The pickup lines were a combined effort of a few of my friends and my beta, as well as myself, and there are a few more that I will use. Don't think the doll's going away just yet. And lively doesn't even cut it with how this courtship is going to work out. Thanks for reviewing!
thrnbrooke: Good luck Harry but I think Draco has you beat.
Harry has no idea what he's really in for! And you're right that Draco has him beat, hands down. This is one competition where Draco is coming out on top... *giggles at the mental image* And, before I forget, *glomps* THRNBROOKE! Thanks for reviewing!
moodysavage: lol I loved the doll! that is so totally stating his intentions... in the most arrogant and annoying way possible... it totally fits!
Everyone loves that doll and I wish that I could take credit for it, but it all goes to my beta, Jamie. I agree that he is stating his intentions loud and clear. Harry can't say that he had no clue as to what Malfoy has planned now, can he? Thanks for the lovely review


Chapter Four - Be Serious In Your Intentions Reviews

thrnbrooke: Don't ruin this chance Draco!!! Best foot forward!!!
Draco does realize that this is a rare opportunity, and so he's going to try his level best not to make an arse of himself, but this *Is* Draco we're talking about. Something is bound to happen.
unneeded: okay draco *rubs his shoulders like a boxer in the ring, preparing to go out to the fight again. "you;ve made yourself a prime opportunity here.  Don't screw this up.  get in there and go for it.  Scheming will only take you so far...  You've got to fight... for your right... to Haaaaaarrrryyyy!" *nods wisely.  "you may even have an unexpected ally in young Teddy.  use him well."
*dies in a fit of giggles* I don't think I've seen a review that's made me laugh quite so much! Draco knows what he's working with now, so he's well prepared to use all and any resources available. (Nice usage of the Beastie Boys! I thoroughly approve! Now I must listen to that song...) I think that Draco still has a lot of work cut out for him. Just because Harry hasn't hexed him, yet, doesn't mean it can't happen.
siriuslynluv: I love this story and can't wait to read more! *please write more soon* Thanks so much for sharing it!
Wow, a new reviewer! Yay! I'm glad that you like it and are so adamant about a new chapter. Hope to have it done sometime soon, but no guarantees as RL is a bi-otch.


Chapter Five ~ Do Not Allow Your Intended to Back Out Reviews

thrnbrooke:  Wonderful!!!!  Sounds like a good first date!!!
Draco certainly thinks so, but Harry's not so sure. He's still waiting to see what else Malfoy's up to. Remember, there are twelve steps, and Draco's only completed five so far.
TalisRuadair:  I do really like where you're going with this. I think it's grand that Harry is incorporating psychological techniques, which many can find helpful especially with the trauma many Wizards suffered throughout the war. Then again perhaps that's a bit overdone in fanfiction, but at the same time it seems to be overlooked in the original work. I really do look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the review! I wanted Harry to do something *different* from his other jobs, not just an Auror or professor or even a regular Healer. True that this is going to be a bit controversial in the Wizarding world, but it is something that JKR missed completely when she wrote the books. Everyone is going to need counseling after something so traumatic as they experienced, and Harry still has his "saving people thing", even if he doesn't want to be an Auror. Working on an>
TalisRuadair:  I do really like where you're going with this. I think it's grand that Harry is incorporating psychological techniques, which many can find helpful especially with the trauma many Wizards suffered throughout the war. Then again perhaps that's a bit overdone in fanfiction, but at the same time it seems to be overlooked in the original work. I really do look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the review! I wanted Harry to do something *different* from his other jobs, not just an Auror or professor or even a regular Healer. True that this is going to be a bit controversial in the Wizarding world, but it is something that JKR missed completely when shthe next chapter now.


Chapter Six ~ Send Only Interesting Gifts Reviews

moodysavage: awwwww... that's just... awwwwwww
I loved Draco's gifts. It was really interesting hearing what Hermione said about the steps of the gifts and their meanings. Sooo looking forward to reading more :)
Moody, you're so adorable~! I liked Draco's gifts too.  They were pretty original, yeah? Hermione's being a lot more level headed about this courting than Ron is, but that's to be expected. She's fascinated with the history and the meanings about everything, and to think, she gets to see it happening first hand!
FairyBean : I just stumbled across this story this morning (an hour ago) and have read the entire thing straight through. I must say it is rather delightful and made me grin like an idiot (good thing I wasnt reading it at work)
I love the interactions of the characters here and how Draco is seemingly still himself but with his soft spot for those green eyes. I look forward to reading more of this when you update.
Brilliant writing, and a definate one to watch. This story idea is magic. :D
Oi! Fairy! Nice to see you for another story! Wow, only an hour to read it all? Are my chapters not long enough? Or are they just that addicting? This story amuses me to no end, to be honest, so it's always great to see that someone else enjoys it. It's also my beta's favorite story. Go figure. (I wouldn't reccommend reading this at work, ever! Just so you know. ~^)
I'm trying my best to keep the characters as IC as possible while tossing them into something outside of their canon selves. It's... interesting to do something that. Draco is the one I have the most fun with, to be honest. He's such an endearing mixture of selfishness and sweetness that I end up going "awwwww" a lot. Thank you for taking the time to read and review! And of course the idea is magic - it was a prompt from the brilliant Lomonaaeren! I adore her!
unneeded: drat and blast, i missed a chappie.  two things i dislike about AFF.  I can't fave an author and i don't get automatic updates.
still, that chappie was most interesting.  Their first interaction with each other as people, rather than rivals.  Teddy is utterly adorable and has them both thoroughly wound around his pinky.
on to the next chappie.
typical malfoy, if you're going to do something... do it with style. three very thoughtful gifts for the price of one.  I'm a little confused though... you said har heard an owl and let him yet the pic link you gave us, draco's letter (and his name) indicate a hawk.  So which is Horus, owl or hawk.  (the bird in the link was magnificent btw).
wow, bred and trained by draco himself... no wonder the bird is so imperious. Still, you can't get more personalized than that.
so, har takes him seriously now. I wonder how that will effect things and how mio and ron will cope.
I wonder how long it will take har to go from means to an end to main prize and beloved, in draco's eyes.
I did miss you last chapter, Unneeded, but it's nice to see you again for this chapter! You could always stalk my LJ for new updates. ^^;;; A few do. I'm glad that you liked them on their date. Teddy is adorable and will one day realise that Harry and Draco are big dopes for him. Luckily, he's a sweet kid who just wants everyone to get along.
Yes, well, Draco is trying to woo a man who could very well afford anything and everything he wants and needs. He is forced to think outside the box for this one. Horus is a hawk. Harry thought it was an owl until he read the letter. Sorry for not making that clear enough. Yes, Horus was bred by Draco himself. That makes it extra special, and he's a raptor. They're extremely elegant and *own* the skies. It was only natural. ~^ Yes, Harry's realised that Draco is totally serious about this wooing business, and you kinda found out how Ron's taking it, but Hermione is reserving her judgment for later. Just wait until the dinner scene. *snort* And Harry has already moved from a prize to something much more tender to Draco... Narcissa has certainly seen the change in her son. ^_^
Asami_Akihito: I am so EXCITED over this story!! Oh my gosh it just kept me reading and reading and got to the last chapter up before I have to leave for work! YAY Its got suspense and so much depth and details all tied together!! I love how you have developed the story and each of the characters!! LOVE IT!!
I'm happy to see that you're so invested into the story! Trust me, it's great fun to write as well as read! I hope you weren't late to work because you were reading fanfiction. I'm not sure what you could use for an excuse.  "I'm sorry. I was stuck reading about Harry and Draco and lost track of the time!" Thank you for the compliments. This story takes a bit of planning to get right, but it does practically write itself. I'm working on the next chapter now.
sharebear: This has definitely captured my interest, which is not that easy to do!!! I can't wait for more chapters!!!Thank you for reading! And reviewing! I'm glad to see that you're enjoying this story so much. Working on chapter seven, but I have other projects going on, so I don't know when the next chapter will be out.
SailorSayuri: Such a GREAT story!!! I absolutely ADORE it!!!! Thanks for wrighting it! *hugs author* The plot is absolutely great, and I loved the fact that you included things that went on in Hogwarts (Buckbeak the Hippogriff)!!! That was pure genius! *winks* The personnality of the characters are a lot like in the movies (personnal opinion here!) and I really love the fact that the story is a Drarry! *grins* I REALLY want to know what happens next! *wails* Please update soon!? Pweety Pwease with a LOT of chocolate on top!?!?!?!? *BIG puppy eyes* Good luck for next chapter! ^_~  Kisses! ^^ Oh, wow, you're really excited. That is completely and totally flattering, to be honest. Thank you so much for reviewing. I had to add things in from the time they were at school, otherwise it would be pointless. It isn't like their problems have suddenly disappeared since they grew up a little. These are things that will have to be addressed, but they *can* be overcome. I try very hard to keep the characters as in-character as possible, but sometimes it's just not. And of course it's Drarry. I haven't figured out a way to write anything that isn't. Boo, but yay! I am working on the next chapter, but I have a lot of stuff going on right now. I don't know when I'll publish again. Sorry. :(


Chapter Seven ~ If Needed, Try Something Traditional Reviews

unneeded: Ah, the traditional threatening by the opposite members family. ^^ Always good for a laugh. seriously though, who did Draco expect him to bring.  He should have known that the weasleys come as a package deal with har. I look forward to seeing what Draco has for him this time. ^^ Poor Cice they grew up a little. These are things that will have to be addressed, but they *can* be overcome. I try very hard to keep the characters as in-character as possible, but sometimes it's just not. And of course it's Drarry. I haven't figured out a way to write anything that isn't. Boo, but yay! I am working on the next chapter, but I have a lot of stuff going on right now. I don't know when I'll publish again. Sorry. :(
ssa.  why the hell is luc refusing treatment.  Does he WANT to die sooner rather than later, just to escape Azkaban? If ever there was a reason for drinking in the morning, learning your husband has a death wish would be it.
Yes, the "if you hurt my friend/brother/whatever I will gut you talk" is coming up on both sides. Draco wasn't expecting to be blown off for the Weasleys, for one. And, he was really hoping to only get one of the couples he'd mentioned. Luckily, Harry didn't bring *everyone*, and that'll be explained next chapter. As for what Draco has for Harry, do you know that you're the ONLY person to even wonder? I am stunned. Floored, really. I felt sorry for Narcissa as well, and you'll find out what's going on with Lucius later. He's not really important at this minute, but he'll play in a little later. I agree. Narcissa is excused for drinking in the morning. Hell, Draco joined her!
Talltree-san: Hmm, I wonder what's in that velvet box! Also I find the Draco doll hilarious, please don't get rid of it XD lol! Another person curious about the box. Thank god! I was beginning to worry that no one noticed his near co-dependence upon it. >> The doll was always meant to go away, but Harry has skipped one important step. So, it stays until he figures it out!
Porsche: Please add more the suspense is killing Me Please don't die! I like my readers alive! Working on the next chapter right now!
moodysavage: oh no... let's talk... Harry and Draco are in for the 'don't hurt my friend or I will hurt you' talk lol Pretty much, but at least it's not just one of them being picked on. There's more coming up in the chapter than just that though. Don't worry. Fun shall ensue!
thrnbrooke: Hope to be a "fly" on the wall and find out what these two groups have to say. Of course you will be! It wouldn't be fun if we didn't get to know, right?
Mya Malfoy: Oooo... I love this story so far... Drarry is my favorite!! Great writing, can't wait for the update! Thanks for review! Drarry's my favourite as well, so it's really no hardship for me to write this story. =P I'm in negotiations with my muses for the next chapter. (And yes, I meant it like that.)
Seiren: Haha, yes, read it all in a very short time, and no, your chapters are perfect in length. I too love Lomonaaeren an am currently crunching through those of hers I find interesting. Read chapter 7 today, a little late it seems but glad youre updating and hope the computer is fixed. Oh and I changed my name from Fairy to Sei lol. This chapter was awesome, good set up and insight. I can kinda guess the things that each set of friends wants to say to Harry and Draco but it will be funfun to read :)  Thanks! Sometimes I worry that the chapters are too short because I don't say everything that's in my brain, or I have to move something I had planned into another chapter because the muses wanted to do something else entirely. It's a fat mess a lot of the time! I absolutely adore Lomonaaeren? Want some suggestions? And you're never too late to read a chapter. I haven't posted the next chapter. Hell, I've barely started it. You're on time. =P Thanks for the compliment about the insight and setup. I really intended for it to be much longer. But... And yes, there will be the normal "if you hurt my friend, I'll castrate you" type things said, but George is with Draco's group. There will be other things to talk about than just Harry. And besides, Harry finally has insight to Draco through Pansy that he wouldn't have had with just the blond and his mum.


Chapter Eight ~ Allow Your Intended to Give Something to You Reviews

thrnbrooke: And what is Harry going to give Draco?  I thought I'd made it obvious, but maybe not? I can't tell you, even though I would LOVE to! You're just going to have to read the next chapter, thrnbrooke!
delia cerrano: Now this is a really really delightful story. Love how you're writing Harry & Draco. Would love to see a little jealousy from Harry but Draco needs to fix it right away because I want them to be together. Hoping for a hot love scene soon also...greedy? yes but I still want it. Why thank you! I do so love writing Harry and Draco in this story, actually. As far as the jealousy angle goes, that'll be addressed at a later date, but I do plan on keeping them together. =P Love scene is coming (pun intended) but I won't say when. It's not greedy. I wanted it at the end of the first chapter. =P
Talltree-san: ...I want that quill XD! Also Ginny should be ashamed of herself, what would Oliver think if he saw her acting this way as if she still with Harry. Don't we all? Too bad Harry's the only one who'd get an interactive gropefest from Draco. *sigh* Well, like George told Draco, the breakup wasn't mutual, now was it? And I'm sorry to say that Oliver would be very sad to see Ginny acting the way she is.
addiena saffir: I am almost dying of curiosity about what the gift from Harry will be.  Oh the conundrum of picking out which fantasy to root for. hmmmm Harry wrapped in nothing but a dark chocolate bow? or the more likely act to do with lucius which will help lead to Harry being wrapped in nothing but a dark chocolate bow... heheheh  *dies of laughter* I'm glad to see that someone realises that there's more going on and that Harry's likely to want to help with *Lucius* instead of getting laid. Although, if Draco had any say in the situation, Harry would be putty in his hands and bed already.
unneeded: Really?  No one else was even curiose? *gives you a stunned look. how could they not be.  I mean, to date draco's presents have been thoughtful and entertaining. now, now, Draco.  No baiting the in laws.  you need them on side to help you land your man.  heh, typical George... always an eye out for opportunity. ^^  Still, har's adopted family were a lot friendly to draco than his were to har.  I'm glad Draco's friends could give har a tip though as har has a point.  Outside of the gifts meanings, har doesn't really know a lot about draco. lol, draco does indeed have a firm ally in Teddy. ^^
Well, no one can say they don't have chemistry.  har's body certainly likes him a lot.  maybe the rest of har should follow suit. ^^ I wonder if this surprisingly un disastrous mutual family meal will lead to the end of the malfoy/ weasley feud.  They seemed to find plenty of common ground to chat about... the ladies anyway. Go Arthur.  At least his 'parents' are fully behind him and Ron is coming round.  Ginny, seriously, just give it up already.  you had your chance and all has obviously not gone well.  it can't be healthy to obsess that much. gushes happily over the ring. ... eheh, sorry, wedding carry over there. (my bro got hitched at the weekend and i forgot to check out their rings. >.< ) I applaud Draco for his restraint.  This may have started off as a plot to clear his name but it's quickly become very much more.  His restraint helps show har that he's serious. I do look forward to seeing what Draco's friends have suggested and what har manages to swing. Trust me, I was surprised that no one but you was really curious about that box. I mean, my beta was, but that's to be expected. Draco's been putting a *lot* of effort into wooing Harry, and seriously, a little velvet box in his pocket? Why wouldn't they want to know what was in it?! Actually, Draco does *not* need Ginny on his side to win Harry, but Hermione and the others, yes, he'll need them. And of course George was going to look into Draco's magic where the doll was concerned. He's a great business man. I don't think that either side was really friendly, to be honest. Blaise and George were the least hostile, but even they were rather reserved from being completely polite with their potential "in-law", as it were. Yes, Harry doesn't really know Draco. Draco is beginning to learn about Harry through the courtship, but he hasn't shared much about himself. Expect that to change. And yes, they DEFINITELY have chemistry. Harry is coming around to the idea that he could end up bonded to Draco for life and it not end in disaster, but he's trying his best to be sensible about this, since he's had so many bad relationships in the last three years. Remember, Draco is fighting an uphill battle, but he does have Teddy (and now Andromeda) on his side. Even Hermione and George are rooting for him to win over Harry's stubbornness. The feud isn't something I've put a lot of thought into for this story line, unlike Merlin, but yeah, it'll be going to the wayside as Harry and Draco get closer and closer. As far as Ginny is concerned, no one's ever going to be good enough for Harry, except for her, and she's going to make her true thoughts known. You'll also find out what she did that broke their engagement. The ring was beautiful, I agree, and it has so much meaning behind it as well. (Congrats to your brother. I love weddings!) Draco started off with just the desire to possess the Boy Who Lived. Now, he wants Harry at his side. Big change there, so he knows not to go too quickly and to leave Harry with wanting more. Harry's gift to Draco is coming up, and I think it's going to be perfect.
Seiren: Aw it didnt post the first time I dont think. *wracks brain to remember what I said while all excited* Uhm, think something like aaah I knew it would be a ring, Harry is a lucky boy to have one with gems the size of peas on it. And I hope that his gift back to Draco is something cool. I like that they had the "Dont hurt him or else!" talk on both the guys, and am waiting in anticipation for the advice Pansy gave Harry for Dracos present. I am hoping its something sophisticated that he will love (Though I know he would like Harry on a platter too lol) The quill is epically brilliant. I wish I had one, though it would make daydreaming in class rather different, and probably too embarrasing hehehe. Thanks for writing Thanks for reviewing! It makes my day! Sorry about it not posting the first time. AFF.net is like that sometimes. Frustrating. Yes, it was a ring. I mean, I thought the box was a dead giveaway, but evidently not for most readers. Hmmm.... And, yes, Harry's a VERY lucky boy to get a ring like that. Especially since it now kinda marks him as Draco's exclusively. Mwahahahaha. Harry's gift is going to be thoughtful, not kinky. Although, I don't think Draco would mind the platter thing either. ~^ Yes, both boys had to have the conversation, considering their pasts. The quill was great fun, and I really wish that Harry had found out what it did before now, but I think it fits that he waited to see.  Makes him more determined, I suppose. And I wouldn't suggest having a quill like that in class. How would you learn?
Miri Daray: Thank you for updating! Great way to continue I cannot wait until the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing. It's great to know that all my hard work is appreciated! Working on the next chapter now.


Chapter Nine ~ Listen To Your Intended's Needs and Desires Reviews

thrnbrooke: That was wonderful!!! Thank you! I had fun writing it. Btw, you win at being the first to review this chapter after posting. You couldn't even wait 30 minutes, dear. ~^
delia cerrano:  We are getting somewhere but so slowly. Glad I know why Ginny & Harry broke up. How could she do that to him without telling him how she felt first? I'm glad because Draco is there now. How does Harry feel about how Draco has been sexually? Yes, it's taking a minute for them to come to terms with what this whole courting thing means. It has to go slowly with their history, but there are only three chapters left, so we're close, believe it or not. Well, I felt it was time to let everyone know why it was that Harry didn't stay engaged to Ginny when it was so certain that they were going to get married. As for how she could do that without talking to Harry first, well, Ginny's always been selfish and she felt like Harry was neglecting her for other things. So, she sought her comfort elsewhere. Draco's glad too. He likes where he is with Harry at this point in time, but he wishes for more—when the time is right of course! Harry is very much attracted to Draco, and they've already addressed Draco's past liasons. You'll be happy to know that Draco has been utterly faithful to Harry since he began his little scheme.
Talltree-san: I too applaud Ginny for her stupidity that left Harry wide open for Draco to sweep him off his feet and carry him away from her harpy claws XD lol! How fitting that she plays Seeker for the Holyhead Harpies, yeah? But, I'm with Draco at feeling no remorse for the death of her relationship with Harry. It makes it so much easier for him to come in and give Harry what he *really* needs!
Zakaira: This story is incredibly entertaining. I can't wait for more! I am working on chapter ten right now! I promise you that! Thank you for reviewing!
Meechypoo64: So loving this story. I love that neither are rushing the jump into bed and the courting ritual gives them the excuse tp really take their time. Draco is showing real growth even if he still shows he's a prat once in awhile. I love the shy insecure Harry that is learning about real desire. Thanks for reviewing! Draco would *love* to have Harry in his bed, of course, but he does realise that pushing will get him nowhere but with blue balls. The ritual gives them time to get to know one another outside of what they have seen over the years. It's a learning experience for both of them. And Draco is still Draco. He's not going to magically change because he's courting Harry. And Harry has met his match, finally, so he's learning more about himself all the time, thank goodness, yes?
disgruntledfairy:  Wow! Your story really knocked me off my feet. It's amazing and I can't get enough. The dialogue is sophisticated, and the characters intense and believable. It is addicting and I will definitely be looking forward to the next update! Thank you! I'm so glad that you're enjoying my story! I am working rather diligently to make the characters seem more mature and evolved from what we see in the books. I'm working on the next chapter now, but I don't know when it'll be ready for you to read. I hope that you'll be patient with me while I get it ready.
SEB: I love this story, and can't wait for a new update (which I hope is coming soon)!!  How funny you should send this, as I finished chapter 10 last night and it's with the beta right now. Glad that you like the story!

Chapter Ten ~ Keep Rival Suitors Away Reviews (Author's aside: I LOVED the response I got for this chapter!)
jujukitty: awww, draco and ron are finally starting to play nice and most of the friends and family are getting along, and now draco and harry are falling apart. really hope ginny gets what's coming to her.  keep up hte good work :) Yes, the families are getting along famously. You'd never know there was a feud that still hasn't been resolved completely, yeah? Well, it's a good thing the next part of the courting process is saying sorry, right?
MakeupDiva84:  A little touchy isn't he? Daphne is obviously a bitch. He shouldn't just be so angry with Harry. Honestly, it's like he's a woman. I hope he forgives Draco cause it wasn't Draco's fault and I hope he does more to Daphne than just tell her off, like set her hair on fire, maybe that will get through to her. And Ginny, well, I hope she falls off a cliff or something cause I can't stand her one tinsy, wincy bit. Update soon. Yes, Harry's very sensitive and insecure this chapter, and it's starting to show. Daphne's out for number one, and she just wanted some fun with Draco. I agree that Harry shouldn't have taken it out on Draco, but it was bound to happen sooner or later. Your comment about Ginny made me giggle for a few minutes. Working on the next chapter now.
delia cerrano: So good.  Oh I hope someone tells Harry to man up..he knew Draco had been around & he should have seen/known that Ginny was up to something from his earlier conversation with Draco. I think he just wants to twist the knife. Is Draco going to just curl up & leave? Or will he fight this. Or will he destroy the girls that messed everything up (financially or socially of course) after getting them to write or tell Harry that Ginny set everything up or was Pansy involved also in order to keep Draco to themselves & unchanged? Besides what makes Harry the arbiter of all? Draco has to change totally, give up all & not have his past ever come up again but Harry just sits there with his "perfect family & perfect life & friends" not having to change anything or explain anything?? Don't worry. Blaise is going to make Harry wake up to what a prat he's been to Draco. He was serious about the threats. =P I can't tell you what Draco is going to do to the others, but rest assured that Pansy was not involved and she's ANGRY at what happened to her best friend. Draco is the one who decided to change so that he could fit Harry. It was his choice, but I agree that he's been doing all of the work so far and it's hardly fair. That's changed now.
moodysavage: HARRY!!! Draco coming to your door and begging you to not end the courtship did nothing? Cruel especially when it was obviously Ginny putting them up to that. I know, right? Harry was rather callous, but then again he was really messed up by the whole thing. Ginny didn't really have to do much pushing to get Daphne to go along with her. She was willing to mess it up for a roll in the sack with Draco again.
MyaMalfoy: What in the hell did you end it like that for??? Draco wouldn't cheat on Harry, especially after all he's done! What are you up to??? I ended that way for a reason, but I can't really tell you. You're right that Draco wouldn't cheat on Harry after allt he work he's done to get them to the point they were at. And you'll see what I'm up to in the next chapter. Sorry it made you so upset.
unneeded: oh, come ONNNN! That last bit had set up painted all over it.  How can har NOT see that.  I mean the bint did the same to him. If he lets it go at that he's an idiot! Yes, yes, it was a setup, and if Harry was thinking clearly, he wouldn't have reacted the way he did, but he was already emotional from their tiff that afternoon. Harry will fix it. He just needs someone to smack him around a bit.
CareLessLover:  No, Harry, No! You freakin' numbskull... Draco loves you... I hope things go in a better route than this! Side note: I ran across your story out of pure I-need-some-good-Draco/Harry-fix and I am proud to say I am not disappointed! I'll be looking for an update (I hope it is soon). LOL! I love to see the reactions I'm getting for Harry. Yes, he was stupid and emotional and not thinking about how much Draco cares for him. It's hard when neither boy/man has actually *said* that the love the other. With only two more chapters to go, I do plan on fixing this problem. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm working on the next chapter as we type. =P
Bobette13: Blegh. I mean, I'm loving this fic so far (and Draco's gifts. Oh god.), but Harry's reaction here seemed off. Heck, he was unwillingly kissed at the same freakin' time, and Draco was anything but receptive to being kissed by Greengrass. Shock and hurt only go so far, although I would see him flying off the handle in some way, just maybe not focusing entirely on Draco doing something wrong. Although I can still see Harry running away and baricading himself in his house at the end. But, yeah, aside from that this fic is awesome and realistic in a very warped way (the Draco-doll. Pure brilliance.), can't wait to see the next chapter! Thank you for your compliments. Draco's gifts are part of the fun of writing this story. Harry is lashing out at Draco because he feels insecure. The shock and the hurt are there, of course, but he's never felt like the courtship would really last or that Draco would get bored and move on. So, he's lashing out first to avoid more heartache in the end. I loved that darn doll, but it was time to give Harry some peace from it. =P Working on the next chapter right now.
May: Wow Harry's being a little Dramatic right? Another woman kissed Draco and instead of trying to find the truth, he's being stupid about it? Because OBVIOUSLY a guy who wants to CHEAT on you, will kiss another woman IN FRONT of you. God, Harry grow some balls. Ginny forced a kiss on him, so does that mean Draco has a right to be IRRATIONALLY angry too? It wasn't like Draco kissed back. I hope Draco doesn't take him back until he grovels. Seriously, Harry's being a little bitch GROW SOME BALLS PLEASE. Slamming the door over something which is obviously set up, breaking an ENGAGEMENT over something stupid. It just shows how Harry is not taking the relationship as seriously as Draco and after all Draco has done. Harry doesn't deserve him. Harry's overreacting, yes, but... He's also not thinking clearly, as you can tell. Draco isn't worried about Harry cheating on him, because Harry's not the type. He's a Gryffindor. Harry's taking it seriously, but he's trying to keep a part of himself distant in case something happens and he gets hurt again. He's stupid. What can I say?
streakerboi: I have been enjoying the progression of this story and all the evolving relationships.  Harry does seem to be acting like a bit of an ass in this latest chapter.  Maybe there's something hormonally off-balance?  I don't know.  At the same time, things really have gone fairly quickly -- from dating to an imminent bonding. Whatever teh story... I'm certain the author is going to do a great job.  I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out. Thank you for reviewing! I'm always happy to hear that my writing is being enjoyed. Yes, Harry's being a jerk, but he's so insecure, if you couldn't tell, and that's partially Draco's fault because he's only just realised that he loves Harry and hasn't yet told him so. No, nothing's hormonally off with Harry. He's just lashing out to make sure he doesn't get hurt. And yes, it's only been about a month since all of this started. You can't really blame him for being scared of it all being taken away and acting out first to keep himself safe. Not the best way to act for Draco, but it makes sense in Harry's mind. Working on the next chapter now. I hope you'll return to find out!
Claudia: Noooo! Damn, I can just kill Ginny now. I don't understand why Oliver is still with her. I hope Harry and Draco will make up again. I  must say, I really enjoy this story. I have read a lot of Drarry stories, and this one is totally unique and totally different. Keep up the good work! X Don't waste your time on Ginny. The Weasleys and Oliver will be dealing with her, for the most part. Harry and Draco are, of course, going to make up. That was the point of working on this story, but this chapter was needed to bring out their issues that they haven't yet faced. I'm glad that I've managed to make this unique, considering how many "get-together" stories there are in this fandom. I couldn't resist the prompt. ^_^ I've just finished chapter 11 and sent it off to my beta, so hopefully the wait isn't *too* long.
Talltree-san: What the heck is wrong with Harry?! He saw Draco didn't reciprocate Greengrass's advances so what's Harry's beef with Draco DX?! Well whatever it is it's probably what Ginny wanted since she's still all hung up over Harry. Hoo boy. I can see that Harry has made another not-fan with that move. Yes, he *did* see that Draco was trying to get her the hell off of him as quickly as he could, but things get explained in the next chapter, which *is* done and with the beta right now. Ginny is very much still hung up on Harry. Too bad Oliver caught her being sneaky, yes? Poor Ollie!
Miri Daray: Nooo poor Draco!! Need update ASAP can't leave him like that  Oh, I don't plan on leaving him like that, but he is going to have a chance to mope about their break-up.
Chapter Eleven ~ Apologize, If You Must Reviews

unneeded:  awwww. their first major fight and make up... they're lucky they have such good friends to brow beat them into making up when they're being stupid. still on the good side, this has cleared the air a LOT so they'll have to find something new to misunderstand each other over. :P poor ollie... i truly do hope he finds someone after the ginger slut screwed him over.  he's going to be a while healing from this. at least he was smart enough to break it off while he was ahead.  he really did love her. i can't wait to see what they do to the greengrass bints... i don't think they'll be content to just let the press handle it without some form of personal twist. mwhahaha. as for gingin, i look forward to seeing what her punishment is as well. i'm seriously wondering if she should be locked in st mungos cause obviously she out of her skull.  their gifts were really thoughtful too. so yay for good fight fall out.  You mean their first fight as a couple... Yes, it was easily remedied once Blaise, Pansy, and Ron got their noses into how to fix things. I was really surprised at how forceful Ron got this chapter, but it was good to see him being a good friend. Yes, I feel sorry for Oliver too. He's a genuinely nice guy in this story who just got used by Ginny. And Astoria had nothing to do with this mess. It was Daphe and Tracey Davis. But, don't worry. Pansy and Draco won't be satisfied just getting them into legal trouble. =P As for Ginny, you'll just have to wait and see. Glad you liked the gifts this go-round.
delia cerrano: Ohhh we don't get to watch the snogging? Rats! To bad there isn't going to be mpreg in this story. Surogacy? Like in Draco and/or Harry have to bed someone until they are pregnant? I would be too jealous for that! Like the way 'Mione, Ron, Pansy, & Blaise & George & his wife have "grown up" but are still themselves. Hope Ginny shows up again though because bad as it makes me I get a kick out of her being so nutsy even though she gets caught each time. No, you don't get to see the snogging this time, but there shall be smex in the last chapter, so don't worry. I couldn't figure out how to make mpreg go with this story, besides it was one of the things specifically asked for not to show up with the prompt. No, think more like invetro-fertilization with magic. No sex with girls for these boys. I've tried to keep everyone IC but grown-up. It's not always easy. Ginny... will be dealt with.
CareLessLover: Hehehehe... If Draco keeps to his word, I'm sure that the next chapter is going to be fun. Draco has something *more* in mind for the next chapter. ~^
MakeupDiva84:  yay, thank you so much for this. I can't wait to see what happens with Daphne and Ginny. I do believe in term 'What goes around comes around.' Which is exactly what should happen to those two little wenches. Pansy isn't likely to let them get away without what she deems as appropriate punishment. Don't worry about that.
CM:  I keep seeing that Draco is the one always giving in, in this relationship. What Harry did was inexcusable yet he didn't have to apologise properly before Draco forgive him. He SLAMMED the door in his face, broke their engagement like it meant nothing and devastated Draco after all Draco did to gain his trust. If this is how flimsy his love is, I'm afraid the next time it's going to happen again and I don't think Draco deserves that. Even in the end his friends had to practically FORCE him to apologise and he was so arrogant till the end of their intervention that I wonder if he's sincere at all. And Draco should have demanded a proper apology because if he doesn't he'll only give room for Harry to walk all over him and be so callous with his heart. Draco is by no means a saint but even he doesn't deserve to be treated like that and have his feelings hurt so much that I bet Harry didn't even think about the pain he went through went Harry threw him aside so easily, insecure or not, I don't think I could hurt the people I love like Harry did.  Let me see if I can address some of this since you're rather upset with Harry about his reaction. 1) Draco started this courting process. He also started their rivalry back in school and took it to more and more vicious heights. Remember the scene in the bathroom 6th year? It only came to violence because Draco was going to Crucio Harry. I think that requires an attitude and life change. Besides, he was a whore and a wastrel before he got that article from Pansy. Don't believe me, read the first few chapters again. 2) Believe it or not, people can forgive without the words "I'm sorry" when the other person makes a humungous effort. That effort? Harry came to the Manor ready to talk. Besides, even with all of Draco's research and attempts to get to know Harry better himself, George still knows the little boy that Harry is on t he inside. That's why George agreed to go with Pansy in the first place to talk to Draco. 3) Draco GOT a proper apology and a very contrite Harry when they were alone. Besides, Harry's a smart guy. He knows what's wrong, they've talked about it, and now he's going to fix what's wrong with HIM to make their relationship work.  Perhaps you should reread their conversation again. Harry's reaction was extreme, but sometimes we require outside help to see that. He got it, he's working on it and he wants things to work with Draco. Anything I missed?
cinder1013: Awww, their first fight. I'm glad Harry apologized. He really needed to. Yes, yes, he did. He was a stupid boy, and Blaise knocked some sense into him. =P
Talltree-san:  Thank you Merlin all is well for now! I wonder what Skeeter will write up to slander Daphne and Tracy, and what will happen with Ginny? I feel bad for Oliver though, he was obviously too good for her anyway she didn't deserve him  Yes, all is well for Harry and Draco for now. Something will pop up soon, I believe. And it's not slander if it's written. It's libel. And it's not libel if it's true! Don't worry. Skeeter will have a field day with Daphne, Tracey and Ginny. Yes, Ollie's the ultimate one who lost here because now he knows that his fiancée didn't care for him enough. At least they weren't married yet, right?
Seiren: I'm not sure if I have just been reviewing this and they have been getting lost, or if I've been reading it without reviewing. Either way, I love this story, and cant wait to see how it ends. Thanks for writing.  Eh, it's okay. EIther way, you've been enjoying it, and that's all that matters. Thanks for reviewing this time for sure though!
Claudia: So glad they are okay again! And i'm glad that you update regulary=] That way, i'm always sure that I can look forward to a new chapter. Thank you again! x  Yes, they are fine now. Until the next fire pops up and they have another fight, but that is a story for a different time. I try to update regularly, but I have fickle muses that work when they want. Lazy slobs. >< The next chapter is the last though!

Side-step—Removal of Rivals Should Be Swift and Permanent Reviews
delia cerrano: Enjoyed this story a great deal. Sorry that it is ending with next chapter.  Always enjoy your stories about Harry & Draco.  Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed. And I am sorry that it's ending too, but there's always Merlin and The End Shall Come. Have you read those?
unneeded: little gin gin's not right in the head.  maybe she's bin tippling a little to much on her namesake if the selfish little slag believed the bad press about har.  she really should have known better.  i think whats saddest is that she did most of it to herself.  definitely needs her head read. my, pans is delightfully vicious and vindictive.  draco should be glad shes a friend as she would a terrible enemy to have. status... Vengeance complete.  ^^  Yes, Ginny's not all there in the sanity department, that's for sure. I love the comment about her maybe being a slosh. I lol'd. I agree that she needs some psychiatric help. Maybe Harry can prescribe some potions and therapy for her, but NOT with him. Draco is grateful for Pansy, yes, but remember that it was HIS ideal to turn the two girls in. Pansy and Blaise were just there to rub it in and make sure they knew who'd set them up for arrest. Yes, vengence is had. All are happy. Sort of. =P
Talltree-san:  Thanks for the chappie and a Happy Turkey Day and Black Friday to you :D!  Thanks for reviewiing! Hope you enjoyed your hols as well, but I don't deal with Black Friday. That's what the internet is for. Shopping and porn. =P
Claudia:  God I love what happened to Ginny. I hope the little wench can keep her paws of Harry. Although I would like to know what would happen if they would try something again=]. But, I loved the chapter, and I'm sad it's almost coming to an end, because it's a brilliant story, for sure! Thankyou! x  I'm glad that you enjoyed the revenge. I know Draco did. =P If who tried to do something again? Daphne and Tracey are in Azkaban (no escapes for them) and Ginny's banned from her entire family and jobless. Oops? Thanks for the compliment, but I'll be happy that it's finished so that I can work on other stories. ^_^
Chapter Twelve ~ Enjoy Your Time Together Reviews
tiggator: Well done. Great story! Enjoyed it a  lot!  :)  Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed it enough to review.
delia cerrano: I am sooo sorry that this was the last chapter.  It was great..begining to end.  Want to see what you come up with next!  I know that it's sad to see this end, but it was a great little thing to work on to break up all the seriousness in Merlin and The End Shall Come. I've already posted the prologue to my new Drarry story. You should check it out.
unneeded: the final chappie. *sniff. ah, but it was such a fun ride.  a wedding, a silenced ginny and hot virgin sex.  what could be better.  so, if it 7 months was fast for a contract to be hammered out... does this mean there are no shot gun wedding equivalents for pure bloods? :P teddy was utterly adorable as usual.  come on, it's har and draco, like they'd have anything less than a strong bond. ^^ thanks for a thoroughly entertaining story and i'll keep my eye out for future offerings. ^^  Thanks, unneeded! *hands you one of Draco's purloined hankies* This was great fun for me to work on. I'm rather sad to see it end, but I always thought it would be about 12 or so chapters and that would be it. I'm just happy that I managed to stay within those bounds. I don't know what could have made it better? The adoption of a child or the beginning of a search for a surrogate? Nope, no shotgun weddings. They can run off and elope, but they're usually disowned. Think of the story Draco told Harry. Yes, Teddy was cute, all without saying a word. I didn't think they would, but that's what Draco wanted to point out to Harry with the golden light. No one else could give our Boy Wonder as strong a bond as Draco can. Thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter faithfully. You have no idea how giddy I was after every chapter was posted to see your review!
Seiren: love that draco n charlie get on so well love gin being bound and silenced for the wedding and love harrys innocent knowledge of sex :) enjoyed this story very much, hope to see more of your work in the future :)  Yes, Draco has found a Weasley that he likes with no strings attached. Well, besides George. But that was a given. Yes, Ginny was kept Silenced and Bound so that she couldn't ruin Harry's wedding. Otherwise, there would have been blood spilt, and I don't think anyone would blame Draco for it. Yes, Harry's lost his "v" card finally, and at least it was with someone who loves him and will worship him, sort of. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and reviewed so faithfully. Read Merlin, SD and The End Shall Come. I'll be working on those, promise.
blu kat: Loved your story. Especially what with Harry being very reluctant to the attention from Draco. Thanks for the read.  Thanks! I tried to follow the prompt as closely as possible. I'm glad that I got it down. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know that you enjoyed it!
Claudia: I loved every bit of your story, and I'm sad to see it end! Beautifully done  Thank you for reviewing! I enjoyed really writing this and the fact that it took me less than ten months to finish it was amazing. I am a little sad to see it end as well, but there's always room and time to come back to play with the boys again.