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Title: How to Get What You Want in One Easy Step
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Gundam Wing
Archive: the normal suspects; anywhere else, ask first
Pairing/Characters: 1x2
Rating: G
Category: yaoi, drabble, romance
Warnings: yaoi/slash, drabble, romance, fluff/sap, ooc, post-EW, language
Words: 271
Disclaimers: I don’t own Gundam Wing. This piece of fanfiction was written for fun, not profit. No money is made.

Author’s Notes: Yet another drabble prompt from hidinginmybones. This time— GW: Duo/Heero, life together after the war.

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Title: One Step Sideways
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Gundam Wing
Archive: the normal suspects; anywhere else, ask first
Pairing/Characters: 2x5
Rating: G
Category: yaoi, drabble, romance
Warnings: yaoi/slash, drabble, romance, angst, ooc, post-EW, language
Words: 616
Summary: Duo wasn’t looking for guests from his past, especially not him.
Disclaimers: I don’t own Gundam Wing. This piece of fanfiction was written for fun, not profit. No money is made.

Author’s Notes: Another of the drabble prompts, this time from Bluesake: the couple duoxwufei. The plot a chance meeting/fate or sudden attraction.

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Title: Leaving Home
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Rurouni Kenshin
Archive: the usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first
Category: drabble, angst
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Kenshin/Kaoru
Warnings: spoilers, angst, ooc
Disclaimers: I don’t own Kenshin. No copyright infringement is intended. No profit is made from this piece of fanfiction.
Word count: 250
Prompt: RK: Kenshin: It was leaving home all over again, but it was for the best. He shouldn’t be a father.

Author’s Note: Almost as soon as Skeren Dreamera sent me this prompt, it’s haunted me to write it. So, I shall attempt to do some justice to it.

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Title:  No One’s Business
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Gundam Wing
Archive: The usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first.
Category: drabble, yuri, angst
Characters/Pairing: Une/Relena, past 13x5, present 1x5
Rating: PG
Warnings: yaoi, yuri, angst, language, ooc, post-EW
Disclaimers: I don’t own Gundam Wing. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money made from this piece of fanfiction.
Words: 462
Prompt: Fandom: GW; Une/Relena: When one is running anything, one needs some backing.

Author’s Note: This is another prompt from the lovely Skeren Dreamera. And just how could I pass this one up?

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Title: Communing with the Dead
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: The usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first.
Category: drabble, angst
Characters/Pairing(s): Luna, Cedric
Rating: PG
Warnings: language, ooc, angst, Luna being Luna
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money made from this piece of fanfiction.
Words: 500
Prompt: HP: Luna/Cedric: As though death was a barrier for true love.

Author’s Note: Yet another drabble from Sky. This time, it’s all dialogue. Let’s see how badly I can screw this up.

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Title:  Slytherin Cunning
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: The usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first.
Category: drabble, slash
Characters/Pairing(s): Blaise/Ron, Harry/Ron, Draco/Harry
Rating: PG
Warnings: slash, sneakiness, language, ooc, EWE, post-Hogwarts
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money made from this piece of fanfiction.
Words: 1618
Prompt: Fandom: Harry Potter
Blaise/Ron: Being a Slytherin means you have to know how to get what you want.

Author’s Note: So, I posted a request on livejournal to jumpstart the creative juices after working so much. This was requested by my lovely friend, Skeren Dreamera.

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Title: Knight in Shining…Panel?
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: The usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first.
Category: drabble, pre-slash
Characters/Pairing: Draco/Harry pre-slash, Harry/Ginny
Rating: PG
Warnings: slash, angst, language, ooc, EWE, post-Hogwarts
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money made from this piece of fanfiction.
Words: 790
Prompt: Fandom: Harry Potter; Draco/Harry, Knight Bus. Run with it :)
Summary: Harry finds that taking a trip comes with a price, one that he may not be ready to pay.

Author’s Note: So, I posted a request on livejournal to jumpstart the creative juices after working so much. This was requested by my lovely new LJ friend, [livejournal.com profile] hidinginmybones. (Special thanks to Llaeryo for Brit-picking this!)

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Title: Sneaking Around...Hogwarts
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: The usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first.
Category: humour
Characters: Fred, George, McGonagall, and Snape
Rating: PG
Warnings: humour, silliness, TWT
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter. No copyright infringement is intended nor is any money made from this piece of fanfiction.
Words: 690
Prompt: Fandom: Harry Potter Pairing. Fred + George (cause you know they're brothers & not sleeping with each other.) Challenge: Because it's just so much fun to watch Fred & George target Snape
Summary: The twins plot. McGonagall watches. Snape fumes.

Author’s Note: So, I posted a request on livejournal to jumpstart the creative juices after working so much. This was requested by my lovely net-wife, Raintenshi.

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Title: Games Should Be Left to Children
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Fushigi Yuugi
Archive: the usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first
Rating: PG
Pairing: Nuriko/Miaka
Category: yuri/het, drabble, angst
Warnings: yuri/het (Hey, Nuriko’s a cross-dresser!), angst, ooc, language
Words: 700
Disclaimers: I’m not Yuu Watase, so I don’t own Fushugi Yuugi. I make no money. I have no money. Enjoy.

Author’s notes: Another one of Sky’s prompts. This time she requested:  FY: Nuriko/Miaka: It started out as a game... then somehow, in the end it wasn’t.

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Alright, friends, since I am finding myself busy with RL stuff that has made me have a hard time actually writing for the many WIPs that I have, I am looking for some help from you all.

What I'd like for you all to do, if you're interested, is to post me some challenges for drabbles (between 100-700 words) in any fandom that I write in (HP, GW, WK, HYD, Woo's Rebirth, FY, IY, RK or SM) and any pairing from your fandom choice. All I require is your choice of fandom/pairing and words/sentence/or situation.

Your help, dear friends, would be most appreciated! Thank yo!
makotosagara: (Missionary Position)
Chapter 1 ~ Lauded Heroes Are For the Birds Review Replies
Chapter 1 Reviews )Chapter 2 ~ The Attack Review Replies
Chapter 2 Reviews )
Chapter 3 ~ Unwelcome Visitors Review replies:
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Chapter Four ~ Silly Disagreements With...
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Chapter Five ~ ...Harry and Draco...
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Chapter Six - Some Aurors Are Rather Stupid
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Chapter Seven - Moronic Death Eaters Are Truly Troubling
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Chapter Eight - All the World Is a Stage Reviews
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Chapter Nine - Actors Must Learn Their Lines Review Replies
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Chapter Ten ~ Mutually Beneficial Allies Review Replies
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Chapter 11 ~ Coming Home? Review Replies
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Chapter 12 ~ Dirty, Scheming Slytherins Reviews
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Chapter 13 ~ Getting to Know You Reviews
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Chapter 14 ~ A Puzzlement Reviews
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Chapter Fifteen ~ A Time for Thought and a Time for Action Reviews
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Chapter Sixteen ~ Home-grown Healers
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Chapter Seventeen ~ Revenge is Spiffy Reviews
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Chapter Eighteen ~ Tick Tock, Tick Tock Reviews
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Chapter Nineteen ~ Scouring the Land Reviews
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Chapter Twenty ~ A Showdown, of Sorts Reviews
Diana: Update soon!  Please tell me you're joking, right?
delia cerrano: I've been dying for someone to tell Ron off forever!  Can't wait to see what Mione has to say to Ron. Yes, there's more to come still. Ron and Harry are going to really going to have to learn to be friends again, as this conversation has really pushed Harry to his limits. Communication is going to by letter for a while. =P
moodysavage: I hope your mom gets better and that real life isn't driving you crazy... or at least not too crazy because life tends to do that. Great chapter! I always do like watching a powerful Harry and Ron needs to stop letting that temper of his rule everything... though I don't see him figuring that out. Thanks so much, moody! Real life is as insane as it ever was, but I'll live, I hope. I do love a powerful!Harry too, and you're right about Ron on both counts. Expect the reconciliation to be a long and difficult process between the Trio.
CareLessLover: Harry is quite pissed. Good job Ron at making Harry an enemey towards yourself. Plus, you just made whatever little doubt Harry had left vanish. Congrates! Yes, Harry's a little ball of ANGRY! Ron's a smart boy, yes? And you're right about Harry not having doubts about wanting distance between himself and Ron for good reason. But, our redheaded friend is always good for that, yes?
unneeded:  i haven't harassed you have i? i hope not.  whiny, naggy readers are a pet peeve of mine, along with crappy spelling/grammar, wall o text and misused words. worse yet, they can even put writers off up dating to spite them which is opposite to what they're after. seriously, who are we to demand a damn thing?!  it's not like you're getting paid for this.  It's great that they love your story and all but seriously people, kindly shut the hell up.  thank you, before you piss the author off to the point that they go and post elsewhere. Ahhhhh, that feels better. Rant Complete.  ^^  oh, arking up all over the place. volatile aren't they.  good thing Cissa is getting good at fielding those. i think i agree with your friend though, to soon and it would have  undermined it some how, robbing it of its force. good grief, ickle ronnikins is completely out of control... i mean, har wasn't exactly the epitome there either, but at least he's not attacking ppls property and carrying on like a complete nutter.  i'm not looking forward to what mio has to say, it's probably going to be extremely painful for her. No, sweetie, I wasn't talking about you! I was talking to the people who sent me a ton of reviews (over on ff.net, not aff.net) DEMANDING that I update. There were three or four in the span of a few hours. I seriously contemplated just deleting the entire story, but doing something like that wouldn't be fair to you and my other loyal readers who wait so patiently. You can also thank Jokes for helping me see that! Thanks for your rant supporting me. It makes me feel better! Yes, Harry and Ron and Draco are just little balls of hate right now! Ron's definitely screwing things up by not at least being patient and waiting for things to be discussed like adults, but Ron's not really known for his maturity half the time, now is he? Harry's very angry, but it's more like angry on behalf of Draco and Hermione than for himself. No, Hermione and Ron aren't going to have a conversation full of sweetness and light. I'm just glad that Draco is seeing her more as a friend than before. ^_^
Seiren: Seems I missed reviewing a chapter last time, so good work on that one. For this one, I totally love when Harry lets his magic out to play. :D Great chapter and I hope home life is better soon for you x Yeah, you did. Ooops? It's okay! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it anyway. Yes, I love a powerful!Harry as much as anyone, but I just don't want him to hurt Draco and Hermione in the mean time! Thanks for the well wishes! See you next chapter! ^_^
Demonadine: ooo I am really liking this story! I can hardly wait for more. Why thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it and looking forward to more. Thank you for reviewing.
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Title: Sigillum Diaboli
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: the usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first
Pairing: Draco/Harry (eventual), Harry/Ginny, James/Lily, mention of past Draco/Others
Rating: NC-17 (eventual)
Warnings: Slash, het, ooc, angst, language, humour, AU, supernatural
Summary: Draco is one of the original Fallen Angels. He’s been cast down to Earth and Hell for so long that he no longer remembers his original name. One day, a pretty boy with green eyes catches his attention. Draco must hurry up and possess the boy before he’s married to the wench with the red hair.
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter and his friends. They belong to a list of people, including the wonderful JKR, Warner Bros, Scholastic Publishing, Raincoat Books, and others. I’m only borrowing them for entertainment purposes.

Author’s Notes: Thanks for all the reviews! Again, thanks to Inky and Sorrel for their help with the Latin, and to Jokes for her handy-dandy beta work!

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Title: Here But For the Grace of Merlin
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: afallenangel.net/makotosagara/, fanfiction.net/~makotosagara, mediaminer.org, Foreverfandom.net, makochanupdates.livejournal.com, hpfandom.net, adultfanfiction.net, thehexfiles.net; anywhere else, please ask first
Category: angst, pre-slash, smut, romance
Pairings: Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione
Warnings: Angst, OOC, DH spoilers (minus Epilogue), language, violence, self-harm, drinking, slash, smut, non-con, BDSM (whatever seriously fucked up things come to mind this time around)
Summary: The final battle left those with the Mark stained more than skin-deep, and the war has left its own mark on the others at the Battle of Hogwarts. However, when Harry's distancing from his friends leads to a nearly fatal accident, Draco has a chance to fulfill a lift-debt he owes to the Boy Who Lived, but he's only doing it because Narcissa is insisting.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is owned by J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Publishing, and Warner Bros and some other stupid companies. We make nothing from this piece of fanfiction, and suing would be pointless, unless you like lint and bad skin!

Author’s Notes: The much anticipated confrontation between Ron, Harry and Draco. I’ve wanted to write this scene for about ten chapters now, but Jokes kept telling me that it was too soon. Oh well. Since she’s absolutely brill, I listened and I think the story’s better for it. Thank you to all my reviewers. I love you all!

Author’s Note 2: I’m very glad that everyone enjoys this story as much as they do, but please do not harass me about new chapters. I work full-time, have an ill mum, and a lot of other stories that I work on. I will update the stories as I find time. Thank you!

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Okay, here's the deal. I wrote this month, as you can see from the posting. Just not a lot. I moved twice, started a new job, and was introduced and forced to deal with an extremely scary woman who killed all desire to write. Also, I didn't keep very accurate records. But, I can tell you what I finished and what I posted.

December 2012 Stats
Published - Something like 35k
Written - Completly thrown off

WIP chapters
DitW06 (000)
HP29 (202)  -      
Merlin21 (000)  -
SD02 (000) 426 - 426
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SD00* (674)
WtR12* (8665)
HP28* (3749)
Merlin20* (3004)
SD01* (2714)
SD02* (2744)
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Title: Sigillum Diaboli
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: the usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first
Pairing: Draco/Harry (eventual), Harry/Ginny, James/Lily, mention of past Draco/Others
Rating: NC-17 (eventual)
Warnings: Slash, het, ooc, angst, language, humour, AU, supernatural
Summary: Draco is one of the original Fallen Angels. He’s been cast down to Earth and Hell for so long that he no longer remembers his original name. One day, a pretty boy with green eyes catches his attention. Draco must hurry up and possess the boy before he’s married to the wench with the red hair.
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter and his friends. They belong to a list of people, including the wonderful JKR, Warner Bros, Scholastic Publishing, Raincoat Books, and others. I’m only borrowing them for entertainment purposes.

Author’s Notes: I’ve been trying to decide how I want to proceed with this story. The prologue was in first person POV, so I think I might continue with that, but there might be parts that Draco might not want to talk about, so Harry will have to take over. Thanks to Sorrel and Inky for their help with the Latin!

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Chapter 1 - Read All Interesting News Sources

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Chapter Two - Gather All Relevant Information First Review Replies
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Chapter Three - Declare Your Intentions Up Front Reviews
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Chapter Four - Be Serious In Your Intentions Reviews
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Chapter Five ~ Do Not Allow Your Intended to Back Out Reviews
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Chapter Six ~ Send Only Interesting Gifts Reviews
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Chapter Seven ~ If Needed, Try Something Traditional Reviews
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Chapter Eight ~ Allow Your Intended to Give Something to You Reviews
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Chapter Nine ~ Listen To Your Intended's Needs and Desires Reviews
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Chapter Ten ~ Keep Rival Suitors Away Reviews (Author's aside: I LOVED the response I got for this chapter!)
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Chapter Eleven ~ Apologize, If You Must Reviews
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Side-step—Removal of Rivals Should Be Swift and Permanent Reviews
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Chapter Twelve ~ Enjoy Your Time Together Reviews
tiggator: Well done. Great story! Enjoyed it a  lot!  :)  Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed it enough to review.
delia cerrano: I am sooo sorry that this was the last chapter.  It was great..begining to end.  Want to see what you come up with next!  I know that it's sad to see this end, but it was a great little thing to work on to break up all the seriousness in Merlin and The End Shall Come. I've already posted the prologue to my new Drarry story. You should check it out.
unneeded: the final chappie. *sniff. ah, but it was such a fun ride.  a wedding, a silenced ginny and hot virgin sex.  what could be better.  so, if it 7 months was fast for a contract to be hammered out... does this mean there are no shot gun wedding equivalents for pure bloods? :P teddy was utterly adorable as usual.  come on, it's har and draco, like they'd have anything less than a strong bond. ^^ thanks for a thoroughly entertaining story and i'll keep my eye out for future offerings. ^^  Thanks, unneeded! *hands you one of Draco's purloined hankies* This was great fun for me to work on. I'm rather sad to see it end, but I always thought it would be about 12 or so chapters and that would be it. I'm just happy that I managed to stay within those bounds. I don't know what could have made it better? The adoption of a child or the beginning of a search for a surrogate? Nope, no shotgun weddings. They can run off and elope, but they're usually disowned. Think of the story Draco told Harry. Yes, Teddy was cute, all without saying a word. I didn't think they would, but that's what Draco wanted to point out to Harry with the golden light. No one else could give our Boy Wonder as strong a bond as Draco can. Thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter faithfully. You have no idea how giddy I was after every chapter was posted to see your review!
Seiren: love that draco n charlie get on so well love gin being bound and silenced for the wedding and love harrys innocent knowledge of sex :) enjoyed this story very much, hope to see more of your work in the future :)  Yes, Draco has found a Weasley that he likes with no strings attached. Well, besides George. But that was a given. Yes, Ginny was kept Silenced and Bound so that she couldn't ruin Harry's wedding. Otherwise, there would have been blood spilt, and I don't think anyone would blame Draco for it. Yes, Harry's lost his "v" card finally, and at least it was with someone who loves him and will worship him, sort of. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and reviewed so faithfully. Read Merlin, SD and The End Shall Come. I'll be working on those, promise.
blu kat: Loved your story. Especially what with Harry being very reluctant to the attention from Draco. Thanks for the read.  Thanks! I tried to follow the prompt as closely as possible. I'm glad that I got it down. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know that you enjoyed it!
Claudia: I loved every bit of your story, and I'm sad to see it end! Beautifully done  Thank you for reviewing! I enjoyed really writing this and the fact that it took me less than ten months to finish it was amazing. I am a little sad to see it end as well, but there's always room and time to come back to play with the boys again.
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Chapter One ~ Okay, Reality Sucks
Sylvia:  I have only read two chapters and I am utterly hooked! I love it. Excellent and economical use of language, powerful writing style. Reminds me a little of the way JK writes, but with a little more visceral strength. Very, very good.   Glad that you liked it. The story gets more verbose as I go along, but I hope that doesn't take away from the actual story's plot. Thank you for reviewing!

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Chapter Twenty-Eight ~ Waiting for you Reviews
unneeded: sighs at Ron's possey of twats.  they are such useless wastes of space.  V wouldn't care if the mb s and halfbloods were close with har or not when it come to the whole maim, torture, kill thing...except that he might make their deaths a bit extra messy.  they leave hogwarts though, they can pretty much count em selves dead. hopefully the twins can keep them from doing anything further on the moronicus much list.  :p  you so totally pinched my idea.  Still, i KNEW that could come back to bite them.  that pretty much sells sev up sewage creak as well huh.  I hope he doesn't get dead.  he's still useful n such and without him the
greengrass girls are meat.  ya know, all things considered, you'd think a super slyth like luc would appreciate and make use of such an ability rather than deride it.  what happened to using all the tools at your disposal?  a wife with future glimpse would be an extremely valuable tool.  he shouldn't have let his squeamishness get in the way. Yay!  make up sex! they're so cute and ridiculously hot together.  Yeah, Ron and his friends are pretty annoying and stupid. I plan on working on that. You're right about Voldie not caring about who's friends with Harry or their bloodstatus, at least. The twins can only do so much. I think they're going to have to make their move against Ron soon though because I'm getting tired of Ronnie's stupidity. Yes, I admit that I used your idea. It had been hovering in the back of my mind since I faked Narcissa's death, but your idea of how Lucius finds out was too
good to pass up. Yeah, Sev's fucked. There's no nice way around it. But he's not down or out yet. Don't worry about Astoria and Daphne, they'll be okay. Lucius should have seen the value in his wife, and he did up to a point, but he saw Voldemort's victory as more important than his wife and children.  Yes, yes, make up sex. I agree they're stupidly cute and hot together. All's okay. For now.

Seiren: I'm finding myself more and more caught up in storylines and less bothered about the smex scenes. It blasphemy to the genre I think lol. Anyway, this chapter was cute, and I can feel something brewing from the Ron side of things that I think the twins wont be able to stop. I am glad you got the confidence to work with Fred and George, they are great material most of the time, and yay for Fred being alive. in a non fanfic related thing, I passed that one exam (five more to go before I pass the course *_*) and thanks.  Yeah, this story moves around a lot, I know, but the storylines, I hope aren't too distracting. The smex scenes aren't really the focus of the story, and I've tried to be true to the fact that Harry and Draco are lovers, yes, but there are a ton of other things going on around them that can't be ignored for long. It's okay to be captivated by the plot. It means I'm doing a good job, I think. Yeah, Ron's up to something, as usualy, but the twins are going to keep him from fucking with Harry and his group at least. Fred and George.... I was intimidated at first, but after I wrote that letter with them for this story, I found myself warming up to the idea of really USING them as characters in the story. And they've become a lot of fun! (and Yes, Fred's alive!)  Congrats and good luck. School comes first!
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Kain:  Not bad, not bad at all. And while Susan was a bit of her rocker, several members of her family were killed and her psychotic anger while misguided was understandable. And i am not gonna lie, i found myself at some points actually rooting for bones since i have NEVER been fond of the elder Malfoy's or other death eater sympathizers. Draco is the only malfoy i can stand and he was certainly....ahem in character here lol. I also noticed that the Auror's were not getting much love here when while they shouldn't let personal feelings interfere with work their attitude towards the Malfoy's was once again understandable since the whole family kind of comes off as smug, dickish karma houdini's. And while Bones should be judged and punished, it's a bit hypocritical of our "protagonist's" to condemn her to harshly  since quite a few of the POV characters here are not exactly paragons of virtue with squeaky clean pasts. Now this is in no way an attempt to flame you as i actually enjoyed this story. This is simply my viewpoint and it is not my intention to offend you in any way.  I agree that Susan, while obviously disturbed, was perfectly sympathetic. Draco was very much himself in this story. Thank you for the compliment, as it's not such an easy thing to do since I'm going off the farm with him. =P As it were. No, the Aurors weren't getting much love, but can you seriously blame Draco (and Harry too) for the way he feels? Yes, Draco comes from a family of Death Eaters. Yes, he was Marked as a teenager. However, really, he was coerced to do a lot of things that he wouldn't normally do. Coward? Yes. Bully? Yes. Vicious little snot? Hell yes. Killer? No. And he only tortured and attempted to kill Dumbledore because of Voldemort. I agree that the Malfoys do come off as smug and dickish, but that's just they way they are. Sorry. Harry's never claimed to be a perfect little paragon of anything. Draco has never seen the point either. I'm not taking your review as a flame. It's a rational, well-thought out review and I wish that more were like this!
delia cerrano: I had a great time reading this. Thanks!  I had an even better time writing it. It was definitely something new for me. Thank you for reviewing!
Tsuki:  I think ur betas will be crazy for a sequel. And I truly hope u make it. I've already read the 3 stories. And And like everyone in this story, I'm in luv with Rosie, but we need litlle Scorpius and Albus too, don't u think. And poor Lucius needs a grandchild to spoil. Waiting for it.  My beta hasn't actually weighed in on a sequel. She was astonished that I even wanted to write *this* one, because of the stress factor for Set Me Free. I'm considering working on another part to this series, but as there's no real idea forming in my head yet, it might be some time before it comes out. In the mean time (so you don't wait forever), you might want to check out some of my other stories. Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad that you enjoyed the entire series.
unneeded:  oh x 3. I DO hope there's more of these.  they're so much fun.  who would have picked little suesie for a psycho.  though, the sibling sharing a similar form idea was very interesting. hehe, weasley grublet reigns triumphant.  lol, who would have though a weasley toddler would bring dear icy luc down.  that's hilarious. damn, but you write a good fic. i also can't wait for the next one to see how draco and har get round the off spring heir continuance thing.  There has been talk between Jokes and myself about another addition to this series of stories. And, yes, they are fun. Well, Susan got picked because she was rather unlikely as a villain. It was either her or Hannah. Who would have thought of a Hufflepuff as a killer, right? Yes, Rose wins over everyone, even Lucius. Trust me, Lucius isn't happy about that, but it did bring up a very important issue about line continuance. You'll just have to wait, as I haven't come up with anything solid for the next part. I'm working on finishing up the WIPs. (Btw, Jokes has the ending of Wooing in her possession!)
thepurplepanda: This had been added to my all time favorites list. I just love the way this was written.  I would be delighted if this has a  sequel... Since this i the sequel to a sequel, it may be some time before I revisit this world, but I do want to work in it again. Thank you for reviewing and enjoying.
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Title: Sigillum Diaboli
Author: Makoto Sagara
Series: Harry Potter
Archive: the usual suspects; anywhere else, please ask first
Pairing: Draco/Harry (eventual), Harry/Ginny, James/Lily, mention of past Draco/Others
Rating: NC-17 (eventual)
Warnings: Slash, het, ooc, angst, language, humour, AU, supernatural
Summary: Draco is one of the original Fallen Angels. He’s been cast down to Earth and Hell for so long that he no longer remembers his original name. One day, a pretty boy with green eyes catches his attention. Draco must hurry up and possess the boy before he’s married to the wench with the red hair.
Disclaimers: I don’t own Harry Potter and his friends. They belong to a list of people, including the wonderful JKR, Warner Bros, Scholastic Publishing, Raincoat Books, and others. I’m only borrowing them for entertainment purposes – no money is made.

Author’s Notes: Um, this idea popped up in my head when I was trying to finish Wooing the Reluctant. I tried very hard to avoid writing it until Wooing was done, but it wouldn’t go away, so here we are. This is going to be an experiment of sorts. Despite the summary, there really won’t be any Weasley or Ginny-bashing. This will contain elements that touch on religion, so if you don’t want to deal with it, don’t read this story!!!! Otherwise, enjoy!

Prologue—Sigillum Diaboli (In Communication with the Devil)

Once, I flew amongst the pure and innocent. It was everything that humans think it is and so much more. There are no words in any language to adequately describe what it was like to be surrounded by light and air and beauty all the time. It was powerful and wonderful. It was beyond magical. Your pathetic brain could never handle the blinding brilliance. It would ooze out of your ears and eye sockets if you tried.

However, my failure to ally with one of the two opposing sides of the Great War found me cast down with the losers, along with the fence-riders. The “good” side couldn’t have anyone around them that wouldn’t commit other to being completely righteous or benevolent or whatever crap they’re spouting this week. No, they all had to be the same boring goody-two-shoes up there. Since I’ve never really been into all of that, out I went.

Now, I walk upon the Earth, watching you humans as you breed, consume, destroy, and pollute. When I am not amongst you lesser beings, I am with the others of my kind and their spawn, far from the beauty of the pure and self-righteous. What is my kind, you ask? Well, first of all, that’s an impertinent question, and I usually kill those that annoy me, but I find myself feeling rather generous right now.

I am what you would call a Fallen Angel. No, I’m not some hideously deformed creature. Really, you humans are utterly ridiculous. What you think of as demons are pathetic and laughable. I’ve never met an ugly demon… Well, Sev isn’t ugly, but he’s certainly not my idea of a good time. No, but I’m sure there are those out there that would find his stalking, swooping presence welcome.

That isn’t to say that I have been without companionship from you little humans or those of my kind since the Fall. Why, that would be stupid. When someone as beautiful as I am is in a human’s presence, they nearly piss themselves trying to impress me so that I will bed them. And, on occasion, I have.

And one in particular has caught my eye. I have been watching him for quite some time and find that the humans around him do not deserve to lick his shoes, let alone touch him. So, I plan on taking what I want.

Those goody-goodies upstairs can suck my cock if they have a problem with it. I don’t plan on giving up any time soon.

Harry James Potter, your days with your little redheaded wench are numbered. I do so hope you don’t mind it. And if you do, well, I will change your mind.

TBC

June 2015

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